Writing

Walht: we are learning to add twist to our writing
Here is my writing

I didn't blow up mars
I didn't become pokemon
I didn't make the sun
but i did go rafting and jet boating
see
I didn't see a poke ball
I didn't see my sister do 20 back flips in a row
I didn't see pac man
But I Did see hanmer spring
eat
I didn't eat my sister
I didn't eat my car
I didn't eat Kevin
But I did eat chips with aioli

Something that I would like to work on is adding more creative words to my  poem.